three bags full (2/2)
15 Jun 2009 12:04 amAND DONE \o/ Final wordcount: 13,846. Somebody had better validate the bloody mess this has made of my priorities in the last few weeks, or there will be TEARS and possibly WRATH.
I'm still not quite happy with it as a story -- the showing dips too far into telling in parts, because if I'm entirely honest it's the skeleton of something even longer. Which I was not prepared to write at this time.
But I'm proud of it, all told :)
( part one is here )
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( If your country changes and you aren't aware of it happening, to which laws do you become subject? )
I'm still not quite happy with it as a story -- the showing dips too far into telling in parts, because if I'm entirely honest it's the skeleton of something even longer. Which I was not prepared to write at this time.
But I'm proud of it, all told :)
( part one is here )
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