fahye: ([tw] one more dead immortal)
Fahye ([personal profile] fahye) wrote2007-01-23 09:54 am

to and fro

This is the coolest writing meme I've seen in ages. Borrowed from [livejournal.com profile] daegaer:

Give me one of my own stories, and a timestamp sometime in the future after the end of the story, or sometime in the past before the story started, and I'll write you at least a hundred words of what happened then, whether it's five minutes before the story started or ten years in the future.

The good thing about it is that I'm not forced to come up with entirely new scenarios, just slip myself into an already-created universe and extrapolate in one direction. Sounds fun!

Everything's at [livejournal.com profile] mercurial_wit, though if you are really mad keen on a drabble I wrote in your LJ years ago...then by all means ask me for that :D

ETA: I'm going to work for a few hours, but all requests will be filled when I get home. That's a promise!
ext_12491: (Paternalism)

[identity profile] schiarire.livejournal.com 2007-01-22 11:29 pm (UTC)(link)
Red gates, at the?
ext_21673: ([other] helena - all in your head)

[identity profile] fahye.livejournal.com 2007-01-22 11:47 pm (UTC)(link)
Timestamp? Or do you mean when Ruth reaches the gates in the handwaved fulfilment of the debt?
ext_12491: (Marat)

[identity profile] schiarire.livejournal.com 2007-01-22 11:57 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, I was just unsure that that was open to timestamping. No. Before. It will be good for you.
ext_21673: ([larklight] omg kissing ew)

[identity profile] fahye.livejournal.com 2007-01-23 12:19 am (UTC)(link)
....ho.

I have work in 20 minutes. It may appear after that.
ext_12491: (Execution)

[identity profile] schiarire.livejournal.com 2007-01-23 12:21 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, like you asked me for something less strange.
ext_21673: ([comics] nervewracked)

[identity profile] fahye.livejournal.com 2007-01-23 12:27 am (UTC)(link)
Mea culpa.

(But...BEFORE...*sulks*)
ext_12491: (Omniscience)

[identity profile] schiarire.livejournal.com 2007-01-23 12:28 am (UTC)(link)
I have this impossible impression that you would prefer to write about cleverly vague sex with the devil instead! I can't imagine why!
ext_21673: ([other] are you watching closely?)

[identity profile] fahye.livejournal.com 2007-01-23 12:40 am (UTC)(link)
Actually, no, I WOULD like to write more about the Eater traditions, but...fiddling them from the child's POV is going to require a lot more settling-into-the-mindset.

Fear not! It will be done.
ext_12491: (Madness)

[identity profile] schiarire.livejournal.com 2007-01-23 12:43 am (UTC)(link)
Hee. That was the challenge.

That is more than I can say! I mean, UHHH, but you will still love me because I am watching the West Wing pilot right now.
ext_21673: ([ww] you feckless thug)

[identity profile] fahye.livejournal.com 2007-01-23 12:44 am (UTC)(link)
You are so lucky that such a thing as unconditional love exists. Although West Wing goes a long way in the positive condition stakes.

*flees for work*
ext_12491: (Headphones)

[identity profile] schiarire.livejournal.com 2007-01-23 12:52 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, I have every intention of writing it . . . it will either be torturous or incredibly indulgent. On verra.

[identity profile] unravels.livejournal.com 2007-01-23 05:12 am (UTC)(link)
*gibbers*

Oh my god yes, Red Gates yay. I love this story desperately. :D

It's entirely too late for me to be making sense. I second Ji, how about that? How could I have forgotten this one. Augh.
ext_21673: ([bsg] life is a dancefloor)

[identity profile] fahye.livejournal.com 2007-01-23 06:09 am (UTC)(link)
*points down* You don't want to request something of your own?
ext_21673: ([other] stephen - bring me that horizon)

[identity profile] fahye.livejournal.com 2007-01-23 05:52 am (UTC)(link)
Twice in my life, only twice, did I see the braiding of my mother’s hair interrupted by one who was not an Eater. The first interruption was by a girl not many years younger than I, a girl with unsteady legs who sucked on the fingers of one hand and kept herself steady on the doorframe with the other. My mother’s braid had reached the nape of her neck, but the fast flicking of her fingers ceased as I pulled in my breath.

“Mama,” I said, uncertain. But my mother just looked at the child for a count of five, and then her fingers began to move again – flick, flick, the dark strands leaping and falling into place.

“It is nothing, my own Rose. It is fine.”

The child stood there – not making a sound beyond the moist noise of her fingers in her mouth – and blinked at my mother, following the movement of her hands. Not once did she glance at me, and by the time the braid was complete she had given a small cough and waddled away again. I was five. I did not think too deeply about the incident; the taboo had been broken, and my mother had sustained the break, and that was all.

The second time – three years later, or maybe four or five; my timeline is not as sturdy as it once was – it was a man who stumbled into the room, just I was refilling the red salt-pouch and my mother was dividing her loose hair into sections. I do not think he recognised us as those who walk, because he nodded at us with no fear or hatred or respect or any sign of the otherness that I was becoming accustomed to.

“I heard...” he said, and looked for a moment at the woman’s corpse.

“You will get out of this place,” my mother said. Her hands dropped from her hair, which fell over itself and untangled as she stood up. This time when the man looked us he must have seen the pouch, because his face paled. And there. The fear.

“I apologise,” he said, “I did not realise,” but my mother showed no signs of letting this pass as she had with the girl.

“Out,” she said again, her quiet voice all the more frightening for the expression on her face. It would have matched a yell. My mother’s slap drove the man backwards by two steps, but I think it was this eerie contrast in her face that pushed him the rest of the way out of the room.
ext_12491: (Conscious)

[identity profile] schiarire.livejournal.com 2007-01-23 05:55 am (UTC)(link)
It's so formal, but so appropriate . . . a very good world.

*does not touch, carefully*
ext_21673: ([tw] something like a candle flame)

[identity profile] fahye.livejournal.com 2007-01-23 06:12 am (UTC)(link)
It is such a strange world. I think it came ready-made, like the story itself. Finding new details is just a matter of stepping - very carefully - into the unexplored corners. With a candle.
agonistes: a house in the shadow of two silos shaped like gramophone bells (shifty)

[personal profile] agonistes 2007-01-22 11:42 pm (UTC)(link)
When Simon wakes up.

Alternately, when Jack wakes up, after "End of Days".

:D?
ext_21673: ([ff] inara - for the beauty of each hour)

[identity profile] fahye.livejournal.com 2007-01-23 12:05 am (UTC)(link)
He wakes, as ever, to the sound of his own stomach growling. This time it growls in unison with a faint muttering at the edge of hearing, but Simon ignores it in favour of savouring the warmth down his side and the smell of Kaylee's hair. When he opens his eyes, it is to the sight of a curious peering face all of three inches away from his own.

"Auhghgh," Simon says faintly, closing his eyes again and wondering that the lurch of his heart didn't wake Kaylee. "River..."

The muttering recedes a little, and coheres - benedìcat vos omnipotens Deus - fluid on her tongue.

"What was that, mèimei?" he says, still half-asleep. He opens his eyes again to find River's fingertips dancing and hovering over his forehead.

"Familial blessing," she says, solemn. "Customary."

This seeps through Simon's fatigue, and by the time his eyes have widened - "River, we didn't..." - she's moved on and away, in the direction of the cockpit, nothing remaining but the smug soundlessness of her feet against the metal.
agonistes: a house in the shadow of two silos shaped like gramophone bells (the sky falls and you feel like it's a)

[personal profile] agonistes 2007-01-23 04:48 am (UTC)(link)
This?

Made my day.

To the extreme.
ext_21673: ([dw] jack - better off as a coward)

[identity profile] fahye.livejournal.com 2007-01-23 04:53 am (UTC)(link)
*grins*

Well. I'm glad. And knowing me I'll end up writing the other one too, because my Jack-voice is pretty much constantly accessible.

[identity profile] liminalliz.livejournal.com 2007-01-29 01:44 pm (UTC)(link)
HILARIOUS. Ever so charming.

[identity profile] marenfic.livejournal.com 2007-01-22 11:46 pm (UTC)(link)
Tesselation- future, the next time they're the same place in the cycle (whenever you decide that will be)
ext_21673: ([bsg] mired in your mythology)

[identity profile] fahye.livejournal.com 2007-01-23 07:19 am (UTC)(link)
He starts to click the handcuffs against the table and you sit very still because despite the reversal he will always be faster, stronger and see more of the pattern. You are not usually one to play a game where the odds are stacked so highly against you, but you don’t have a lot of choice. You are, at least, confident that he is not going to kill you. That will always be your prerogative. Captor or captive, it is always Leoben Conoy who dies.

You mention this, perhaps unwisely.

He smiles.

“To look at it another way,” he says, “it will always be you who has to keep going.”

You think about praying for his soul and you think about Casey’s arms stretched out towards her mother and you think about Lee, who is waiting on the other side of the hatch and who will look at you for exactly three seconds – making sure you still exist – before leaving. It’s pointless. It’s very Lee. You exist and you are Starbuck, indestructible, and you will always exist – which is, you suppose, Leoben’s point.

“What do you hear, Starbuck?” he whispers, and what you hear is his breath, and behind that: the cycle of time ticking by.

[identity profile] liminalliz.livejournal.com 2007-01-29 01:45 pm (UTC)(link)
SADFLJL!J!!! LOVE!!

[identity profile] pirateygoodness.livejournal.com 2007-01-23 12:19 am (UTC)(link)
Almost Rhymes With Orange. (http://mercurial-wit.livejournal.com/33183.html#cutid1) Half an hour before #4, or five minutes after #10.
ext_21673: ([bsg] cpt. yellow glasses #2)

[identity profile] fahye.livejournal.com 2007-01-23 04:26 pm (UTC)(link)
(going with half an hour before #4)

~

"I'm bored," Kara tells the ceiling, and you've shoved your chair backwards by a foot before you remember that you're mad at her. Or she's mad at you. After a moment's consideration, you decide that it really doesn't matter either way, and stand up.

"Going somewhere, Apollo?" Racetrack eyes your pile of credits.

"I'm beat." Quick smile. "Enjoy the game."

Kara will think of some excuse and everyone will pretend to believe her. Kara will push you backwards until you hit a solid surface and she'll pretend that what you're doing together is void, worthless, nothing. Kara will slip her fingers between cloth and skin and you'll pretend that it's enough.

These are the rules, and they say that you will expend some energy in making her gasp and writhe but expend even more in biting back the words that would make it mean something; in all the years leading up to this moment and the moments identical to it that have already passed, you never once imagined that it would be like this.

She kisses you as though she wants to erase you.

You try not to care.

[identity profile] pirateygoodness.livejournal.com 2007-01-23 04:44 pm (UTC)(link)
Mmmm. Pilots.

[identity profile] tarheel.livejournal.com 2007-01-23 05:41 am (UTC)(link)
Prettyplease write something set a year after the end of 'Those journeymen divine'.
ext_21673: ([bsg] starbuck - nuanced navigation)

[identity profile] fahye.livejournal.com 2007-01-23 07:10 am (UTC)(link)
I'd really rather not add anything to any stories that I cowrote: the universes aren't solely mine, and I'd feel uncomfortable writing anything else for them.

Is there anything else I can write for you, for any of my other stories?

[identity profile] tarheel.livejournal.com 2007-01-24 08:38 am (UTC)(link)
How about pre-"benevolent sibling"? Cylons setting up and testing their cameras.
ext_21673: ([bsg] cylon crack)

[identity profile] fahye.livejournal.com 2007-02-04 11:17 pm (UTC)(link)
“Ms Biers?”

“This is all fascinating.” D’Anna flipped her hair over one shoulder and wished the damn kid would disappear, because she needed to plant this camera at floor level and he was just so attentive.

“Um, if you don’t mind, ma’am, we should probably keep this are clear –”

“Whoops!” D'Anna said rather desperately, making sure that her shirt gaped even more than usual as she tripped forwards. The boy flushed and looked away, and she took the opportunity to fix the tiny camera to the line where floor met wall. “There must be – ah – a patch of grease here.”

“I’ll let someone know,” Billy said, still polite, holding out a hand to help her up.

~

“Heeey, another one’s online.” Sharon fiddled with the remote, programming in the new channel, and looked around. “Where is everyone? Where’s Six?”

“Communing with God,” Leoben said distantly. “Was that Starbuck?”

No. You can’t say that every time a blonde walks past a camera. Where’s Simon, then?”

“Attempting to convince Six that communing with God doesn’t have to involve nudity. Was that Starbuck?”

[identity profile] liminalliz.livejournal.com 2007-01-24 03:56 am (UTC)(link)
Benevolent Sibling: (http://mercurial-wit.livejournal.com/31848.html)
Time stamp: D'Anna's off being crazy and they're watching the Kara/Lee/Anders/Dualla love [geometric shape].

My favorite wee fic by you of all time all time all time has stuck with me forever and a day (http://fahye.livejournal.com/289766.html?thread=1945574):
Time stamp: Future fic from this point in the series.
ext_21673: ([bsg] mom & dad are having a chat)

[identity profile] fahye.livejournal.com 2007-01-24 11:50 am (UTC)(link)
One day she spits at him, really spits, and then spits in the figurative sense as well: “This is a nightmare,” (she spits), “and one day I’ll wake up from it.”

Yesterday she killed him. Today he is moving his head in slow circles, trying out the muscles.

“Are you sure that’s what you want, Starbuck?” he asks, sounding lazy and curious as he always does.

“Well, let me think,” and she laughs a bitter laugh that she recognises from her old self, and is glad of, because if she does think about this then she starts running into things like the fact that this enforced stasis is uncomplicated and so full of anger that – for the fist time in her life – there is no room for guilt. “Wow, gee, I don’t know, would I rather be free or stuck up in here with you?”

“I don’t know either,” Leoben says, disarmingly. She hates him.

(Casey’s mother reaches out and the weight of the girl is lifted from her like eyelids opening; this is waking up. Kara is waking up. And in this moment she looks around the flight deck almost hoping that Leoben will be there, smiling at her, so that she can walk to him and let him brush back her hair and talk her back down into the dream.)

[identity profile] liminalliz.livejournal.com 2007-01-29 01:46 pm (UTC)(link)
OH SO MAGNIFICENT. HOW I LOVE THIS. HAHAHAHA. Her self destructive nature and his very fine grip on knowing both himself and her utterly... OH FAHYE.