Well... I had been working under the assumption that they had Fallen at that point, yes, though rebellion - in whatever form - might have done it if you want to go that way. I think that particular moment is covered much better in your original story, anyway, so I am trying to stay well away from it. ;)

And as for becoming independent, I think I see what you mean. Something gradual but growing until actually fighting back becomes conceivable. And after going back to the fight (SO cool to reread, wow), it looks like there were already armies formed up before Raguel turns up, so that answers another question.

Thanks! :D