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Fahye ([personal profile] fahye) wrote2008-07-25 11:30 pm
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spirits to enforce, art to enchant

Mmm. I spent tonight out at Ivy, which is a highly swanky complex of restaurants and bars, eating some slightly overpriced but still divine modern Japanese and drinking some alcohol and actually feeling pretty for the first time in weeks. [livejournal.com profile] _leareth is bad for my wallet but good for my mental health :)

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This is for [livejournal.com profile] octavius_x, who asked for something to do with Ariel. I'm a little bit drunk on sake and G&T and I make no guarantees as to the quality of what pours out of my fingertips when I start typing.



The Tempest -- Miranda/Ferdinand, Ariel/Ferdinand


all afire with me


had I been any god of power, I would have sunk the sea within the earth

...

when this burns, 'twill weep for having wearied you


In the line of Miranda's smile is a childhood spent as sole mistress of an empty kingdom, princess in blood and stature and everything but name; in the soft steel of her eyes is the bridge built for her by powerful men, cloaks laid over the muddy waters of adolescence, that she might step delicately from maiden to queen without dirtying her feet. No real chessboard allows such an easy transformation, but Ferdinand has only won one game of chess against his wife: the first. He suspects that she only let him cheat because she was learning his strategy, and that his king remained upright only because the flesh-and-blood equivalent stumbled into view before the game was played to its completion.



To Prospero's daughter nothing is impossible; nothing is so great that it cannot be overcome. She frowns at the elements when they displease her and she sits with her eyes fixed on the clouds as though through strength of will she can halt the winds and send them off in another direction. Ferdinand remembers her casual threat of lightning against something as innocent as a stack of dry wood, and places himself within the line of her gaze until the danger has melted into affection.

"What's this?" He smiles. "No kind words for your husband, after he has spent the day hearing tedious people talk about tedious things?"

"I am sorry that they are boring you, my love," she says, and winds her arms around his neck. "If I were a man I would cut them down for such an insult to your time."

"Then it is just as well you are not," he replies, trying for humour.

Her eyes do not darken, but they shift into confusion.

To be king you must learn when to wield your weapons and when to keep them sheathed. He is afraid most of all that one day Miranda will forget that Naples is not a desert island, and that her subjects are not errant spirits, and he will find himself once more holding a blade that refuses to obey his commands. He is afraid of what she will slice through for his sake.



If I were.

If I could.

In his opinion Miranda speaks in altogether too many hypotheticals for someone who has been given all she ever wanted.



The chess pieces create a portrait of static defeat, lying where the game of three nights ago ended. Ferdinand draws his chair closer to the warmth of the fireplace and tries to find his weaknesses within the pattern. He rolls his toppled king beneath his finger and wonders, not for the first time, if he found his wife in a dream and brought her into the real world purely by accident.

"She can't help but conquer the world; she's never been taught any better," says a quiet voice, and when Ferdinand looks up his hand moves with such violence that the chess pieces shudder in every direction and fall to the floor.

This is not his wife. This slender white-clad girl has no knowledge of her own power, nor of the world beyond the supple coastline of her island domain. She lifts her eyes in innocence and is the wondrous thing that Ferdinand fell in love with, all those years ago.

He is standing, though he cannot remember the act of standing. His hand curls around the chair's high back. "What are you?"

"Do you not know me, Prince of Naples?" There is a sweet music behind the words that he recognises not in his ears but in his eyes, a tune that calls up the shadow of mourning tears and the tragedy of blue skies after a storm.

"No," he says, meaning, remind me.



Where the not-Miranda's fingers touch his bare arms, the tips of them dissolve into intangible flames. Her hair is seaweed under his hands and inside her mouth sings the echo of the sea, the taste of salt. And yet there is something about her that is familiar, a hole in his longings suddenly slotted shut. The clumsiness of her small neat lips. The expanse of her skin like a white sand beach when the waves retreat; the promise that his footprints will be the first and the only marks to sully its perfection.

"This is what you wanted," Ariel says. "This is what you tried to bring back to Naples and contain within a golden ring."

Fire and water and the despairing leap from an inevitable shipwreck.

Ferdinand closes his eyes and says, "Yes."

Ariel whispers, "How deceived we were."



"What are you doing here?"

"Whatever I please. That was the agreement."

"No. He's mine. This one is mine."

Ariel laughs and laughs and presses her sea-spray cheek to Ferdinand's chest, drenching his shirt, the sudden chill forcing his shame and his excuses into a single ball of ice within his throat.

Miranda snaps her fingers and the fire burns high.
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[personal profile] genarti 2008-07-25 05:58 pm (UTC)(link)
...Ahahaha.

Oh nice. I love this Miranda -- sweet and chilling, and ever so much more plausible as the daughter of Prospero than someone without that innocent lethal steel at her core.
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[identity profile] ineptshieldmaid.livejournal.com 2008-07-25 09:01 pm (UTC)(link)
it has been said before, but: oooh, you're good...
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[identity profile] fahye.livejournal.com 2008-07-25 11:21 pm (UTC)(link)
I have SO MUCH of this Miranda in my head. She just pops out occasionally in fics about Ariel.

[identity profile] octavius-x.livejournal.com 2008-07-26 12:01 am (UTC)(link)
Ow. Owww.

presses her sea-spray cheek to Ferdinand's chest, drenching his shirt

I love this so much you do not even know. The Tempest is my favorite play. People are usually like "Wut? Isn't that the one with Caliban and the molesting?" but I love it in its outlandishness. And I love this, I love that you have her contained in the golden ring. Geesus I love your Miranda, just excellence.

So...I'll do an accompanying piece, but um I'm gonna put in the HP realm if you don't mind. LOL want to do some Sirius/Remus now. <3
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[identity profile] fahye.livejournal.com 2008-07-26 12:09 am (UTC)(link)
When I came to Sydney I left my Complete Works behind (with much bemoaning) but I brought my pocket-sized Tempest with me and I read about half of the play on the bus yesterday, so this came out far more Tempest-Tempest than HP-Tempest. But I am very keen to see your Sirius/Remus!

Have you read WH Auden's The Sea and the Mirror (http://fahye.livejournal.com/492499.html)?

[identity profile] littledust.livejournal.com 2008-07-26 07:21 pm (UTC)(link)
Why must writing critical essays take precedent over responses like THIS? *tears out hair* Academia needs to meet academic!fandom.

Which is to say that Miranda is her father's daughter. Fire and water! I am useless at feedback today, but: ♥

[identity profile] nuit-belle.livejournal.com 2008-09-08 01:44 am (UTC)(link)
I love this. I have so many favourite lines, I'd probably end up quoting this whole thing back at you. But this one packs such a punch: In his opinion Miranda speaks in altogether too many hypotheticals for someone who has been given all she ever wanted.

I vote you should write much more of this Miranda.
ext_21673: ([ss] my father had a daughter)

[identity profile] fahye.livejournal.com 2008-09-08 06:44 am (UTC)(link)
Thanks :) This Miranda pops her head out occasionally, but she never comes with anything so helpful as a PLOT.
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[identity profile] azdaja-dafema.livejournal.com 2009-05-11 11:02 am (UTC)(link)
CHESS.

"In his opinion Miranda speaks in altogether too many hypotheticals for someone who has been given all she ever wanted."

"She can't help but conquer the world; she's never been taught any better,"

Really interesting take on Miranda here: I've personally never had too much time for her, but may re-read it with this in mind!
ext_21673: ([dw] scatter them across time and space)

[identity profile] fahye.livejournal.com 2009-05-11 11:58 am (UTC)(link)
Ooh, I'm so glad you like this & the other Tempest fic! I adore writing about this play (Miranda & Ariel especially, as you've probably guessed), and it's always heartening when someone finds these little ficlets and enjoys them :) Thank you.

I actually played Miranda in a production once and found her to be exceedingly boring as written, so coming up with new layers for her was a bit of a defence mechanism.
ext_2955: black and white photo of flying birds and a lamp-post (all these beautiful words)

[identity profile] azdaja-dafema.livejournal.com 2009-05-11 04:23 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, I can imagine! I've seen enough productions of it that would warrant extra layers to her. Actually, one of the most interesting ones I've seen used only three actors, and therefore the doubling up was quite interesting - Ferdinand and Caliban were played by the same actor, and another was both Miranda and Ariel. Which made for quite a novel take on the parallels of the characters and their relations to Prospero and the island.